- Conventions of dance routine for pop video
- not enough close-ups
- visuals and lyrics contradict themselves
- don't think it works as it's too different
- no intertextuality
- not a lot of notions of looking
Editing
- too many fade-ins, more transitions
- good use of the fade in transition
- jump within footage needs to be sorted
- like the reverse shot
Camerawork
- bit wobbly, could have used tripod more
- use tripod if possible
- need more variety of shots
- liked the panning shot of woods at the start
Mise-en-Scene
- no change in costume
- get more locations
- possible change in costumes needed
- not much use of props
- bright natural light, used well
- good use of sunlight at the beginning
- bright colourful costumes
Performance
- dance routine is good
- routine was brilliant just need more
- not enough lipsyncing
- lip-sync with dancing
- dancers not strong enough for lead vocalist
- get a new lead vocalist and leave the others as back-up/ dancers only
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